2025年02期
英语作文实效提分——高级词汇和句型
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【正文】 阅卷老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词，因为用学得较晚的单词，能体现“学以致用”的意识。如：表“美丽的”形容词少用初中词汇 beautiful，多用高中词汇 appealing， attractive， charming，fascinating，carefully-attentively，get→obtain/acquire，have→ possess， improve→ promote/strengthen等，能给文章增加亮点。其他如amazingoutstanding；fantastic；incredible brilliant depressed/blue/down；gloomy；upset等。
With your birthday coming， I'd like to send you one Chinese painting as a gift.你的生日快到了，我想送你一幅中国画作为礼物。（coming升级为 approaching）
There will be many activities to mark this unforgettable occasion.将会有很多活动来纪念这个难忘的时刻。（many升级为 various）
一、高级词汇用于应用文写作
利用高级词汇升级下面回复信中的加黑体词语，并背诵成文。
Dear Jim，
As for your last letter asking about the sports activities in our school， I'd like to share with you some details.
Our PE subject is well received because many 1.various sports courses are offered. Besides 2. Moreover/Additionally ，there are sports clubs available for us to develop 3.foster athletic skills after class. Also 4.Furthermore some sports events are held regularly such as the sports meet in September， where everyone can experience the spirit of sports Al these sports events have benefited us greatly. Not only have they encouraged us to exercise actively but improved 5. strengthened our sense of teamwork.
What about your school's sports activities？
Yours，
Li Hua
二、高级词汇用于读后续写
利用高级词汇升级下面读后续写中的加黑体词语，并体会动作和细节描写。
My heart beating rapidly， I headed for the register. I paid the dollar for the three things1.items and was about to leave when I felt a heavy tap on my shoulder. It was a big detective.“You stole something. You will be searched，”he announced. Afraid ②Terrified/Frightened，I slid the book out from inside the shirt and handed it over. “An encyclopedia？”he asked， somewhat surprised.“Yes，“ whispered， trembling，“Why didn't' you ask your parents to buy ③purchase it？”“1 did， but they didn't' have the money.” With sigh， he made me promise to tell my parents about my wrongdoing and then let me leave.
Back home. I told my mother what I had promised the detective. Unexpectedly， she didn't explode as usual. She fell silent， looking very④ extremely anxious. Filled ⑤Consumed with guilt， gathered my courage， apologized and promised that it would never happen again. ”All will be OK！ said my mother， wrapping me in her arms. My mother then asked me to play outside for while and happily I went out. Hours later， when returned home， noticed a bag inside which was the World Book Encyclopedia.
三、with结构和否定词
with/without复合结构With/Without+名词/代词+ doing/done/todo/adj.结构，在句中可作定语或状语，提高作文得分档次。否定意义的词的运用否定词 no， nor， never， nothing等可与比较级连用。
With time going by， more and more people are beginning to realize the importance of protecting the environment.
随着时间的推移，越来越多的人开始意识到保护环境的重要性。
With all the factors taken into consideration， I believe that you are certain to catch up with others soon.
考虑所有因素，我相信不久你就会赶上别人。
Of course， no tourists will miss the local food in Xi'an， nor will we.当然，游客都不会错过西安当地的食物，我们也不例外
Relations between the two countries have never been better.两国关系从未这么好过。
1、with结构和否定词用于应用文写作
用with结构或含否定词的句式升级下面倡议书中的加黑体部分，并背诵成文。
Dear fellow students，
As plogging combines jogging with picking up litter1.With plogging combining jogging with picking up litter， the new fitness trend has swept across the world since it was created.
It has been acknowledged that plogging has lots o advantages. Firstly， more calories can be consumed while plogging， thus improving exercise efficiency. Additionally， whatever age you are， you can easily adopt the sports style.Special training as well as extra costs isn't required 2 No special training is required， nor are extra costs. Most importantly， the environment can benefit from such a sport.
In short， plogging not only benefits our health but also does good to our environment， Let's spare no effort to take action.
Li Hua
2、with结构和否定词用于读后续写
按汉语提示用with结构或含否定词的句式填空或用with结构或含否定词的句式升级下面读后续写中的加黑体部分。
As Roman was in farther from the snake， he jumped to the window. At the same time Roman grabbed the curtain and so hard did he pull it that the curtain ended up landing in his hand. Then without waiting a second， he threw the curtain over the snake. 1.With the snake covered by the curtain （蛇被窗帘盖住）， he grabbed the two kids by their hands and brought them out of the room The kids ran for their life and reached at the front yard within a second. He again went inside taking his mom to the front yard. As Mom was shaking like a leaf and the kids were sweating hard 2.With Mom shaking like a leaf and the kids sweating hard.he could hardly calm down.
Later， he called the rescue team from his cellphone. As soon as the rescue team arrived， they caught the snake and took it along with them， so they could hand over the snake to the concerned organization. Mom got to normal as the snake was caught③with the snake caught but the kids were still scared.④Roman had never felt angrier with himself（罗曼从未这么生自己的气）， His heart beat fast⑤With his heart beating fast， and he said to himself，“What an unusual day！”
四、被动句和感叹句
被动句：用英语思维地道表达在概要写作中可利用被动句转换句式或在读后续写和应用文写作中使表达更地道。感叹句：适时感叹，必要强调在写作中利用what/how引导的感叹句，可恰当地表达心情和感受。eg .
1.There is no doubt that attention should be paid to the problem of overusing mobile phones.
毫无疑问，我们应该关注过度使用手机的问题。
2.How delighted I was to be one of the members in the warm family！ This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory. 成为这个温暖的大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。
（一）、被动句和感叹句用于应用文写作
根据汉语提示用被动句或感叹句补全下面的劝慰信，并背诵成文。
Dear Jamie，
I'm sorry to learn you have difficulty in your Chinese learning. To be honest，1.Chinese characters and essays are never easy to learn.（汉字和汉语文章从来不容易学）. However you don't have to feel upset. Firstly， it would be wise to turn to the Internet for help when②.You are faced with a problem（你面对问题）， where you can learn how to read and write. Additionally，③You are advised to join Chinese clubs（建议你加入汉语俱乐部） to practice oral Chinese with others. Finally， learn some relevant courses on relevant apps，and④your comprehension will be improved （你的理解力将得以提高）
If there exist further problems， please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）、被动句和感叹句用于读后续写
用被动句转换下面读后续写中的加黑体部分，或根据汉语提示用感叹句填空。
He thought for a moment and realized that they just would not follow a human. He said to himself， “How can I possibly save them？ The only way would be for me to become like those swans. If only I could become like one of them. Then I could save them①they could be saved by me.They would follow me and I would lead them to safety. ”He realized it was clear that these swans were afraid of human beings and every time he got close to them， they would fl away. He thought he should come up with a good idea. Just then， a good idea occurred to his mind. He thought of his geese that he raised on his farm 2. that were raised on his farm. After all， they were relatives. Maybe they were much easier to get along with. He rushed to his geese and drove them to the front of the barn. Then he went back to his： house， observing through the window. The cold soon drove his geese into the barn 3.His geese were driven into the barn by the cold soon. followed by the swans. His method worked！_ The swans were safe now！ 4.How delighted he was.（他是多么高兴啊）！
五、特殊句式——强调句和倒装句
强调句型“It is/was+被强调成分+that/who+其他成分”可以加强语气，突出某些人物或事件的重要性；运用部分/全部倒装句以示强调。虚拟语气和省略句用虚拟语气可使语气委婉，常用于请求和建议的情景；用省略句可避免不必要的重复。
1.It is your detailed explanation on the topic that will appeal to me most. 就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。
2.Following the speech is a one-hour lecture on the history Chinese music.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。
3.If it had not been for your assistance， would not have made such rapid progress.要不是你的帮助，我就不会取得如此快的进步
4. When asked about happiness， we usually think of something extraordinary， an absolute delight.当被问及幸福时，我们通常会想到一些不同寻常的事，一种绝对的喜悦。
（一）特殊句式用于应用文写作
按照所给汉语提示，利用特殊句式补全或升级下面道歉信中的加黑体句子，并背诵成文。
Dear Nancy，
I'm sorry to tell you I cannot go to the show with you next Saturday. I am writing to apologize to you. The reason why I am not available is that we volunteers are to launch a campaign at that time1.It is at that time that we volunteers are to launch a campaign.（用强调句升级）.registered volunteer， it is my responsibility to participate in public welfare activities. 2.I do hope you can forgive me.（我真的希望你能原谅我，用助动词强调动词）. Meanwhile， if it is convenient for you， 3. I suggest we fix another date.（我建议我们另安排日期）. If it is not4.If not
（用省略句升级）， let me know what time suits you Sorry again for any inconvenience caused.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）特殊句式用于读后续写
按照所给汉语提示，利用特殊句式补全或升级下面读后续写中的加黑体句子，并体会细节描写。
Some time later， he woke up under a tree in the same valley. He was alone， worried about his dog and he knew he was going to get into more trouble with his wife. Then he noticed a curious thing-his hair was over his shoulders and his beard was over a foot long！ He was so surprised that he decided immediately to get back to the village1.So surprised was he that he decided immediately to get back to the village. （用倒装句升级）， It was on arriving there that he realized that everything was different and2.There stood lots of new houses（那里矗立着许多新房，倒装句）. To his surprise， he didn't recognize the people in the village. When he got to his house， he saw it was old and abandoned. To his sorrow， his wife died two years ago 3.It was two years ago that his wife died（用强调句强调two years ago升级） and the two children had left away. Despite the argument with his wife， he was regretful of the past. Facing this sharp change， Rip was determined to change his way of living and never be a lazy man. He not only became a diligent farmer， but he also kept pace with the new society4.Not only did he become a diligent farmer but he also kept pace with the new society.（用倒装句升级）. In his spare time， he would still went to the old inn that had been rebuilt to tell some stories about his adventure in the valley which appealed to the children a lot.
六、三大从句
运用定语从句，让表述更丰满在概要写作中可利用定语从句合并关键信息或转换句式。
运用名词性从句，让表达更多样在概要写作中可利用名词性从句合并关键信息或转换句式。
运用状语从句，让逻辑更清晰在概要写作中可利用状语从句转换并列句或合并关键信息。
1. This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students， each of which appeals to many students.这学期我校为学生们开设了许多选修课，每门课都吸引了很多学生。
2.It is known that table tennis is national ball in my country， so that you should know what my favorite sports is.正如你所知，乒乓球是中国的国球，因此你应该知道我最喜欢的运动是什么。
3.However tough the task is， there. is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.不管任务多么艰巨，毫无疑问，我们将克服所有的困难并取得成功。
（一）、三大从句运用于应用文写作
利用三大从句升级下面感谢信中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空，并背诵成文。
Dear Bill，
I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to your whole family for①what you did for me when i studied in London.（当我在伦敦学习时你为我所做的事，宾语从句+状语从句） as an exchange student. Your kindness and consideration made my stay so enjoyable②What made my stay so enjoyable is your kindness and consideration.（用主语从句升级）
The beautiful scenery， well protected environment and kind local people impressed me so much Not only did I learn a lot about your rich culture， but I practiced my spoken English.③There is no doubt that the time when i stayed with you and your family（毫无疑问，我和你及你的家人在一起的时光，同位语从句+定语从句） left me so warm and deep impression.
Thanks again for your kindness.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）、三大从句运用于读后续写
利用三大从句升级下面读后续写中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空，并体会动作描写。
When he arrived at his father’s house （当他到了父亲的房子时）， sudden sadness and regret filled his heart.He began to search through his father's important papers and saw the still new Bible， just as he had left it years ago. With tears， he opened the Bible and began to turn the pages.As /When/While he was reading（当他在读时，状语从句），a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. It had a tag with the name of the dealer， and he had the sports car he had desired③who had the sports car he had desired（用定语从句升级）. On the tag was the date of his graduation， and the words...“PAID IN FULL”
How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected？ Do not spoil what you have by desiring④what you don’t have（你所没有的，宾语从句）；but remember that what you now have was once among the things⑤that you only hoped for（你希望得到的，定语从句 ） Sometimes we don't realize the good fortune we have or we could have⑥because we expect “the packaging” to be different（因为我们期望包装是不同的，状语从句）.⑦What may appear as bad fortune（看起来是坏运气的事，主语从句） may in fact be the door⑧which is waiting to be opened（正等待被打开的，定语从句）
七、短语优先
短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，应巧妙利用短语
表达文义，增加文采。如， realize→be aware（of）； attract →appeal to； value→attach importance to； cause-→contribute to； choose→pick out； visit→ pay a visit to等。
1.Bear in mind that you should avoid getting hurt during th training.（bear in mind代替普通词汇 remember）记住：在训练中你应该避免受伤
2.I'd like to share with you some details related to our school's' music festival.（related to代替普通词汇 about）我想和你介绍我们学校音乐节的相关细节。
3.Take advantage of the opportunity to show off your talent（take advantage of代替普通词汇use）利用这次机会展示你的才能。
（一）、高级词汇用于应用文写作
利用高级单词和短语升级下面推荐信中的加黑体词语，并背诵成文
Dear Terry，
Learning you're coming to China to experience 1.have a taste of the Chinese traditional folk arts， I'd like to recommend you choose paper-cutting as there are many2.various/abundant/a variety of forms of folk arts throughout China.
The themes of paper-cutting usually include 3.involve everything in local people's daily life. Paper-cutting not only shows 4. represent the wisdom of Chinese people but is also useful 5.of use Traditionally， people paste them on doors or windows when celebrating important occasions， especially for the Spring Festival. Besides6. Additionally/ furthermore/ moreover / in addition， it enjoys increasingly high popularity， and that is why it is an ideal gift for friends I sincerely hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）、高级词汇用于读后续写
利用高级单词和短语升级下面读后续写中的加黑体词语。
Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand. He chose1.picked out a red flower and put it on our table.“Merry Christmas！”he greeted us in a cheerful voice. Before we could say “Thank you！， he went to other tables. Immediately2.in an instant everyone in the room was given 3.presented with flowers In the bright light， the flowers were glowing in full bloom. These magical flowers melted our frustrated hearts and blew away all the unpleasant moods.
The piano player came alive and pleasant music filled the whole room. A festival atmosphere drowned all of us. We happily danced to the joyful music， singing laughing and wishing each other good luck. The old flower woman also joined us， unable to 4.failing to hide her excitement and thanks 5.gratitude /appreciation The spirit of Christmas came back to us again. It brought all of us together in this small restaurant on a foreign land. All this was thanks to a young American sailor， who， through his kindness and generosity， brightened6 .lit up our paths.
八、活用非谓语
利用非谓语动词对两个甚至两个以上的简单句进行整合，使其成为高级的表达方式。应用文写作中利用非谓语动词巧妙表达写作要点。用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练在概要写作中可利用非谓语动词将要点句中的定语从句简化为非谓语动词作定语，或将状语从句转换为非谓语动词作状语。
1. George's mother saw the wild strawberries， so she was very glad， and tears ran down her face.
→Seeing the wild strawberries， George's mother was very glad， tears running down her face.
2.We will hold a large photography exhibition which reflects the development of our school.
→ We will hold a large photography exhibition reflecting the development of our school.
（一）、非谓语动词用于应用文写作
根据汉语提示用非谓语动词补全下面的投诉信或按要求用非谓语动词升级或简化加黑体部分，并背诵成文
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua， and am writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website 1.writing to complain about the jacket bought from your website.（用非谓语动词简化）2.On/Upon receiving the jacket（一收到夹克），I was annoyed to find there was something wrong with it.
The moment the mail box arrived， couldn't' wait to open it，3.only to find a red one（结果却发现一件红色的）. Even worse， need size170 while you sent me a size 175. Additionally， its zipper doesn't work at all！ My concern is whether you will return me the money or replace the jacket4.have the jacket replaced（用非谓语动词作宾补升级）
Looking forward to your early reply.
（二）、非谓语动词用于读后续写
按照所给汉语提示用非谓语补全或用非谓语动词升级下面读后续写中的加黑体句子，并体会细节描写。
Immediately， the class became excited. Some could hardly wait to tell their seatmates about their holiday trips， and their eyes were shining and faces were glowing with joy1.eyes shining and face glowing with joy（用独立主格升级）Those who hadn't been anywhere bombarded them with inquiring questions. Enormous joy welled up in every corner of the classroom. Obviously he was confused at the sudden noisy situation2.Obviously confused at the sudden noisy situation（用分词作状语升级）， Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. Surprisingly， my explanation put a smile on his face.“Any volunteer to share your story？” asked Ms Sullivan， whose words I set down on paper for Rafael.
Then Rafael rose and walked onto the platform.3.Greeting us with a confident smile（用自信的微笑迎接我们，分词作状语）， Rafael shared his story in magnetic voice， which left me stunned. I felt more ashamed to learn that he ran a website to help children with hearing problems than guilty about4.thinking disabled people couldn’t be intelligent（认为残疾人不聪明，非谓语动词作宾语）Then his voice was lost in a thunderous burst of applause. Feeling a lump in the throat， clapped my hands even more loudly，5.determined never to judge a book by its cover.（决定不再以貌取人，分词作状语）
九、高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于应用文写作
1.按要求升级下面的演讲稿中的加黑体部分，并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇，最后背诵成文。
Ladies and gentlemen，
It's my great honor to be here on behalf of our school and I'd like to offer you my warmest welcome. Now， allow me to share with you the arrangements for your stay here.
1.Firstly/To begin with ， we will show you around our school， during which you can get to know about the history of our school.A one-week seminar then follows 2.Then follows a one-week seminar（用倒装句升级）， where both parties can have a deep understanding of each other. 3. Last but not least， we will show you some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy， paintings and Peking opera 4.some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy， painting and Peking opera will be shown to you （用被动句升级）⑤Hopefully， you can enjoy your stay.
Thank you.
2.高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于读后续写
按要求升级下面的读后续写中的加黑体部分，并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
When we arrived home， we found father was lying on the floor， bleeding. Though we were very surprised 1.Though very surprised（用省略句升级）， we sent him to hospital at once. With the help of doctors， my father came back to life on Christmas Eve， and it made our family pleased.2.which made our family pleased（用非限制性定语从句升级）. My parents loved each other very much， so my mother kept my father company day and night3.My parents loved each other so much that my mother kept my father company day and night（用状语从句升级）， completely forgetting the trip to Florida. After my father woke up， he said sorry to us④and told us everything that happened to him.
After we left for the airport to buy tickets， a man limbed into our house to steal money. My father caught him and bravely fought with him， 5. but unfortunately the man hurt my father. When we heard the news 6.Hearing the news（用非谓语动词作状语升级）， we were proud of him. On Christmas Eve， we held a party in hospital for my father. Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.7.singing Christmas songs to him .（用非谓语动词作状语升级） That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful. I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital 8.Never will I forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital .
With your birthday coming， I'd like to send you one Chinese painting as a gift.你的生日快到了，我想送你一幅中国画作为礼物。（coming升级为 approaching）
There will be many activities to mark this unforgettable occasion.将会有很多活动来纪念这个难忘的时刻。（many升级为 various）
一、高级词汇用于应用文写作
利用高级词汇升级下面回复信中的加黑体词语，并背诵成文。
Dear Jim，
As for your last letter asking about the sports activities in our school， I'd like to share with you some details.
Our PE subject is well received because many 1.various sports courses are offered. Besides 2. Moreover/Additionally ，there are sports clubs available for us to develop 3.foster athletic skills after class. Also 4.Furthermore some sports events are held regularly such as the sports meet in September， where everyone can experience the spirit of sports Al these sports events have benefited us greatly. Not only have they encouraged us to exercise actively but improved 5. strengthened our sense of teamwork.
What about your school's sports activities？
Yours，
Li Hua
二、高级词汇用于读后续写
利用高级词汇升级下面读后续写中的加黑体词语，并体会动作和细节描写。
My heart beating rapidly， I headed for the register. I paid the dollar for the three things1.items and was about to leave when I felt a heavy tap on my shoulder. It was a big detective.“You stole something. You will be searched，”he announced. Afraid ②Terrified/Frightened，I slid the book out from inside the shirt and handed it over. “An encyclopedia？”he asked， somewhat surprised.“Yes，“ whispered， trembling，“Why didn't' you ask your parents to buy ③purchase it？”“1 did， but they didn't' have the money.” With sigh， he made me promise to tell my parents about my wrongdoing and then let me leave.
Back home. I told my mother what I had promised the detective. Unexpectedly， she didn't explode as usual. She fell silent， looking very④ extremely anxious. Filled ⑤Consumed with guilt， gathered my courage， apologized and promised that it would never happen again. ”All will be OK！ said my mother， wrapping me in her arms. My mother then asked me to play outside for while and happily I went out. Hours later， when returned home， noticed a bag inside which was the World Book Encyclopedia.
三、with结构和否定词
with/without复合结构With/Without+名词/代词+ doing/done/todo/adj.结构，在句中可作定语或状语，提高作文得分档次。否定意义的词的运用否定词 no， nor， never， nothing等可与比较级连用。
With time going by， more and more people are beginning to realize the importance of protecting the environment.
随着时间的推移，越来越多的人开始意识到保护环境的重要性。
With all the factors taken into consideration， I believe that you are certain to catch up with others soon.
考虑所有因素，我相信不久你就会赶上别人。
Of course， no tourists will miss the local food in Xi'an， nor will we.当然，游客都不会错过西安当地的食物，我们也不例外
Relations between the two countries have never been better.两国关系从未这么好过。
1、with结构和否定词用于应用文写作
用with结构或含否定词的句式升级下面倡议书中的加黑体部分，并背诵成文。
Dear fellow students，
As plogging combines jogging with picking up litter1.With plogging combining jogging with picking up litter， the new fitness trend has swept across the world since it was created.
It has been acknowledged that plogging has lots o advantages. Firstly， more calories can be consumed while plogging， thus improving exercise efficiency. Additionally， whatever age you are， you can easily adopt the sports style.Special training as well as extra costs isn't required 2 No special training is required， nor are extra costs. Most importantly， the environment can benefit from such a sport.
In short， plogging not only benefits our health but also does good to our environment， Let's spare no effort to take action.
Li Hua
2、with结构和否定词用于读后续写
按汉语提示用with结构或含否定词的句式填空或用with结构或含否定词的句式升级下面读后续写中的加黑体部分。
As Roman was in farther from the snake， he jumped to the window. At the same time Roman grabbed the curtain and so hard did he pull it that the curtain ended up landing in his hand. Then without waiting a second， he threw the curtain over the snake. 1.With the snake covered by the curtain （蛇被窗帘盖住）， he grabbed the two kids by their hands and brought them out of the room The kids ran for their life and reached at the front yard within a second. He again went inside taking his mom to the front yard. As Mom was shaking like a leaf and the kids were sweating hard 2.With Mom shaking like a leaf and the kids sweating hard.he could hardly calm down.
Later， he called the rescue team from his cellphone. As soon as the rescue team arrived， they caught the snake and took it along with them， so they could hand over the snake to the concerned organization. Mom got to normal as the snake was caught③with the snake caught but the kids were still scared.④Roman had never felt angrier with himself（罗曼从未这么生自己的气）， His heart beat fast⑤With his heart beating fast， and he said to himself，“What an unusual day！”
四、被动句和感叹句
被动句：用英语思维地道表达在概要写作中可利用被动句转换句式或在读后续写和应用文写作中使表达更地道。感叹句：适时感叹，必要强调在写作中利用what/how引导的感叹句，可恰当地表达心情和感受。eg .
1.There is no doubt that attention should be paid to the problem of overusing mobile phones.
毫无疑问，我们应该关注过度使用手机的问题。
2.How delighted I was to be one of the members in the warm family！ This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory. 成为这个温暖的大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。
（一）、被动句和感叹句用于应用文写作
根据汉语提示用被动句或感叹句补全下面的劝慰信，并背诵成文。
Dear Jamie，
I'm sorry to learn you have difficulty in your Chinese learning. To be honest，1.Chinese characters and essays are never easy to learn.（汉字和汉语文章从来不容易学）. However you don't have to feel upset. Firstly， it would be wise to turn to the Internet for help when②.You are faced with a problem（你面对问题）， where you can learn how to read and write. Additionally，③You are advised to join Chinese clubs（建议你加入汉语俱乐部） to practice oral Chinese with others. Finally， learn some relevant courses on relevant apps，and④your comprehension will be improved （你的理解力将得以提高）
If there exist further problems， please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）、被动句和感叹句用于读后续写
用被动句转换下面读后续写中的加黑体部分，或根据汉语提示用感叹句填空。
He thought for a moment and realized that they just would not follow a human. He said to himself， “How can I possibly save them？ The only way would be for me to become like those swans. If only I could become like one of them. Then I could save them①they could be saved by me.They would follow me and I would lead them to safety. ”He realized it was clear that these swans were afraid of human beings and every time he got close to them， they would fl away. He thought he should come up with a good idea. Just then， a good idea occurred to his mind. He thought of his geese that he raised on his farm 2. that were raised on his farm. After all， they were relatives. Maybe they were much easier to get along with. He rushed to his geese and drove them to the front of the barn. Then he went back to his： house， observing through the window. The cold soon drove his geese into the barn 3.His geese were driven into the barn by the cold soon. followed by the swans. His method worked！_ The swans were safe now！ 4.How delighted he was.（他是多么高兴啊）！
五、特殊句式——强调句和倒装句
强调句型“It is/was+被强调成分+that/who+其他成分”可以加强语气，突出某些人物或事件的重要性；运用部分/全部倒装句以示强调。虚拟语气和省略句用虚拟语气可使语气委婉，常用于请求和建议的情景；用省略句可避免不必要的重复。
1.It is your detailed explanation on the topic that will appeal to me most. 就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。
2.Following the speech is a one-hour lecture on the history Chinese music.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。
3.If it had not been for your assistance， would not have made such rapid progress.要不是你的帮助，我就不会取得如此快的进步
4. When asked about happiness， we usually think of something extraordinary， an absolute delight.当被问及幸福时，我们通常会想到一些不同寻常的事，一种绝对的喜悦。
（一）特殊句式用于应用文写作
按照所给汉语提示，利用特殊句式补全或升级下面道歉信中的加黑体句子，并背诵成文。
Dear Nancy，
I'm sorry to tell you I cannot go to the show with you next Saturday. I am writing to apologize to you. The reason why I am not available is that we volunteers are to launch a campaign at that time1.It is at that time that we volunteers are to launch a campaign.（用强调句升级）.registered volunteer， it is my responsibility to participate in public welfare activities. 2.I do hope you can forgive me.（我真的希望你能原谅我，用助动词强调动词）. Meanwhile， if it is convenient for you， 3. I suggest we fix another date.（我建议我们另安排日期）. If it is not4.If not
（用省略句升级）， let me know what time suits you Sorry again for any inconvenience caused.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）特殊句式用于读后续写
按照所给汉语提示，利用特殊句式补全或升级下面读后续写中的加黑体句子，并体会细节描写。
Some time later， he woke up under a tree in the same valley. He was alone， worried about his dog and he knew he was going to get into more trouble with his wife. Then he noticed a curious thing-his hair was over his shoulders and his beard was over a foot long！ He was so surprised that he decided immediately to get back to the village1.So surprised was he that he decided immediately to get back to the village. （用倒装句升级）， It was on arriving there that he realized that everything was different and2.There stood lots of new houses（那里矗立着许多新房，倒装句）. To his surprise， he didn't recognize the people in the village. When he got to his house， he saw it was old and abandoned. To his sorrow， his wife died two years ago 3.It was two years ago that his wife died（用强调句强调two years ago升级） and the two children had left away. Despite the argument with his wife， he was regretful of the past. Facing this sharp change， Rip was determined to change his way of living and never be a lazy man. He not only became a diligent farmer， but he also kept pace with the new society4.Not only did he become a diligent farmer but he also kept pace with the new society.（用倒装句升级）. In his spare time， he would still went to the old inn that had been rebuilt to tell some stories about his adventure in the valley which appealed to the children a lot.
六、三大从句
运用定语从句，让表述更丰满在概要写作中可利用定语从句合并关键信息或转换句式。
运用名词性从句，让表达更多样在概要写作中可利用名词性从句合并关键信息或转换句式。
运用状语从句，让逻辑更清晰在概要写作中可利用状语从句转换并列句或合并关键信息。
1. This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students， each of which appeals to many students.这学期我校为学生们开设了许多选修课，每门课都吸引了很多学生。
2.It is known that table tennis is national ball in my country， so that you should know what my favorite sports is.正如你所知，乒乓球是中国的国球，因此你应该知道我最喜欢的运动是什么。
3.However tough the task is， there. is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.不管任务多么艰巨，毫无疑问，我们将克服所有的困难并取得成功。
（一）、三大从句运用于应用文写作
利用三大从句升级下面感谢信中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空，并背诵成文。
Dear Bill，
I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to your whole family for①what you did for me when i studied in London.（当我在伦敦学习时你为我所做的事，宾语从句+状语从句） as an exchange student. Your kindness and consideration made my stay so enjoyable②What made my stay so enjoyable is your kindness and consideration.（用主语从句升级）
The beautiful scenery， well protected environment and kind local people impressed me so much Not only did I learn a lot about your rich culture， but I practiced my spoken English.③There is no doubt that the time when i stayed with you and your family（毫无疑问，我和你及你的家人在一起的时光，同位语从句+定语从句） left me so warm and deep impression.
Thanks again for your kindness.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）、三大从句运用于读后续写
利用三大从句升级下面读后续写中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空，并体会动作描写。
When he arrived at his father’s house （当他到了父亲的房子时）， sudden sadness and regret filled his heart.He began to search through his father's important papers and saw the still new Bible， just as he had left it years ago. With tears， he opened the Bible and began to turn the pages.As /When/While he was reading（当他在读时，状语从句），a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. It had a tag with the name of the dealer， and he had the sports car he had desired③who had the sports car he had desired（用定语从句升级）. On the tag was the date of his graduation， and the words...“PAID IN FULL”
How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected？ Do not spoil what you have by desiring④what you don’t have（你所没有的，宾语从句）；but remember that what you now have was once among the things⑤that you only hoped for（你希望得到的，定语从句 ） Sometimes we don't realize the good fortune we have or we could have⑥because we expect “the packaging” to be different（因为我们期望包装是不同的，状语从句）.⑦What may appear as bad fortune（看起来是坏运气的事，主语从句） may in fact be the door⑧which is waiting to be opened（正等待被打开的，定语从句）
七、短语优先
短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，应巧妙利用短语
表达文义，增加文采。如， realize→be aware（of）； attract →appeal to； value→attach importance to； cause-→contribute to； choose→pick out； visit→ pay a visit to等。
1.Bear in mind that you should avoid getting hurt during th training.（bear in mind代替普通词汇 remember）记住：在训练中你应该避免受伤
2.I'd like to share with you some details related to our school's' music festival.（related to代替普通词汇 about）我想和你介绍我们学校音乐节的相关细节。
3.Take advantage of the opportunity to show off your talent（take advantage of代替普通词汇use）利用这次机会展示你的才能。
（一）、高级词汇用于应用文写作
利用高级单词和短语升级下面推荐信中的加黑体词语，并背诵成文
Dear Terry，
Learning you're coming to China to experience 1.have a taste of the Chinese traditional folk arts， I'd like to recommend you choose paper-cutting as there are many2.various/abundant/a variety of forms of folk arts throughout China.
The themes of paper-cutting usually include 3.involve everything in local people's daily life. Paper-cutting not only shows 4. represent the wisdom of Chinese people but is also useful 5.of use Traditionally， people paste them on doors or windows when celebrating important occasions， especially for the Spring Festival. Besides6. Additionally/ furthermore/ moreover / in addition， it enjoys increasingly high popularity， and that is why it is an ideal gift for friends I sincerely hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours，
Li Hua
（二）、高级词汇用于读后续写
利用高级单词和短语升级下面读后续写中的加黑体词语。
Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand. He chose1.picked out a red flower and put it on our table.“Merry Christmas！”he greeted us in a cheerful voice. Before we could say “Thank you！， he went to other tables. Immediately2.in an instant everyone in the room was given 3.presented with flowers In the bright light， the flowers were glowing in full bloom. These magical flowers melted our frustrated hearts and blew away all the unpleasant moods.
The piano player came alive and pleasant music filled the whole room. A festival atmosphere drowned all of us. We happily danced to the joyful music， singing laughing and wishing each other good luck. The old flower woman also joined us， unable to 4.failing to hide her excitement and thanks 5.gratitude /appreciation The spirit of Christmas came back to us again. It brought all of us together in this small restaurant on a foreign land. All this was thanks to a young American sailor， who， through his kindness and generosity， brightened6 .lit up our paths.
八、活用非谓语
利用非谓语动词对两个甚至两个以上的简单句进行整合，使其成为高级的表达方式。应用文写作中利用非谓语动词巧妙表达写作要点。用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练在概要写作中可利用非谓语动词将要点句中的定语从句简化为非谓语动词作定语，或将状语从句转换为非谓语动词作状语。
1. George's mother saw the wild strawberries， so she was very glad， and tears ran down her face.
→Seeing the wild strawberries， George's mother was very glad， tears running down her face.
2.We will hold a large photography exhibition which reflects the development of our school.
→ We will hold a large photography exhibition reflecting the development of our school.
（一）、非谓语动词用于应用文写作
根据汉语提示用非谓语动词补全下面的投诉信或按要求用非谓语动词升级或简化加黑体部分，并背诵成文
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua， and am writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website 1.writing to complain about the jacket bought from your website.（用非谓语动词简化）2.On/Upon receiving the jacket（一收到夹克），I was annoyed to find there was something wrong with it.
The moment the mail box arrived， couldn't' wait to open it，3.only to find a red one（结果却发现一件红色的）. Even worse， need size170 while you sent me a size 175. Additionally， its zipper doesn't work at all！ My concern is whether you will return me the money or replace the jacket4.have the jacket replaced（用非谓语动词作宾补升级）
Looking forward to your early reply.
（二）、非谓语动词用于读后续写
按照所给汉语提示用非谓语补全或用非谓语动词升级下面读后续写中的加黑体句子，并体会细节描写。
Immediately， the class became excited. Some could hardly wait to tell their seatmates about their holiday trips， and their eyes were shining and faces were glowing with joy1.eyes shining and face glowing with joy（用独立主格升级）Those who hadn't been anywhere bombarded them with inquiring questions. Enormous joy welled up in every corner of the classroom. Obviously he was confused at the sudden noisy situation2.Obviously confused at the sudden noisy situation（用分词作状语升级）， Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. Surprisingly， my explanation put a smile on his face.“Any volunteer to share your story？” asked Ms Sullivan， whose words I set down on paper for Rafael.
Then Rafael rose and walked onto the platform.3.Greeting us with a confident smile（用自信的微笑迎接我们，分词作状语）， Rafael shared his story in magnetic voice， which left me stunned. I felt more ashamed to learn that he ran a website to help children with hearing problems than guilty about4.thinking disabled people couldn’t be intelligent（认为残疾人不聪明，非谓语动词作宾语）Then his voice was lost in a thunderous burst of applause. Feeling a lump in the throat， clapped my hands even more loudly，5.determined never to judge a book by its cover.（决定不再以貌取人，分词作状语）
九、高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于应用文写作
1.按要求升级下面的演讲稿中的加黑体部分，并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇，最后背诵成文。
Ladies and gentlemen，
It's my great honor to be here on behalf of our school and I'd like to offer you my warmest welcome. Now， allow me to share with you the arrangements for your stay here.
1.Firstly/To begin with ， we will show you around our school， during which you can get to know about the history of our school.A one-week seminar then follows 2.Then follows a one-week seminar（用倒装句升级）， where both parties can have a deep understanding of each other. 3. Last but not least， we will show you some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy， paintings and Peking opera 4.some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy， painting and Peking opera will be shown to you （用被动句升级）⑤Hopefully， you can enjoy your stay.
Thank you.
2.高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于读后续写
按要求升级下面的读后续写中的加黑体部分，并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
When we arrived home， we found father was lying on the floor， bleeding. Though we were very surprised 1.Though very surprised（用省略句升级）， we sent him to hospital at once. With the help of doctors， my father came back to life on Christmas Eve， and it made our family pleased.2.which made our family pleased（用非限制性定语从句升级）. My parents loved each other very much， so my mother kept my father company day and night3.My parents loved each other so much that my mother kept my father company day and night（用状语从句升级）， completely forgetting the trip to Florida. After my father woke up， he said sorry to us④and told us everything that happened to him.
After we left for the airport to buy tickets， a man limbed into our house to steal money. My father caught him and bravely fought with him， 5. but unfortunately the man hurt my father. When we heard the news 6.Hearing the news（用非谓语动词作状语升级）， we were proud of him. On Christmas Eve， we held a party in hospital for my father. Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.7.singing Christmas songs to him .（用非谓语动词作状语升级） That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful. I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital 8.Never will I forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital .
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